All Comments on 'A Surprise for John Ch. 03'

This is the first one I've seen....just came to it! Thanks! Can't wait to check out more!

a good story, a pleasant read, a great subject matter. It could use a little fleshing out - a bit of character and plot development; otherwise this story is right up my ... uh....alley. Please continue, I'm dying to find out who the "daddy" is going to be. And the dressing part could really be a secondary plot development, if you want to go in that direction.

Thanks for sharing, I'm definitely tenting my panties .....

OR RETARDED

Wow, she's just a bitch and he's a wimp. If he actually resisted there might be some conflict, but he just rolls over and she is just bitchy. Why does this take place ocher months she could have done it the same night, he doesn't say no. Also, why isn't she with a woman? She seems to have a lot of anger issues, if I was him I'd run because she's going to keep escalating in her age against him.

No way this marriage is based on love anymore! He needs to run! Dump the cunt,and even if he likes the fag aspects,he needs to get some balance! ~ And what is she doing for her pussy,fucking jig-a-boos with 12 inch cocks?!

Sorry but this trilogy just doesn't fly!