All Comments on 'A Swapping Mistake Ch. 04'

A very good story well told. It was thoughtful and a considered approach to a young couple making a mistake...booze and weed and youth eh? Obviously a lot of the recent commentators are Mr Perfect by the looks of it. Thank you.

I thought it was great story. To the Anonyns that criticising this, you obviously didnt read it all because your comments about him being a cuck were off. And to the those saying she loved the guy more then her husband because she didn't want to give up her baby are truly idiots. The husband was the one that wanted to sleep with his neighbour so he was ok with the swap, he even gave his wife weed to get her more loose. He only realised his mistake after the fact and couldn't live with it. I'm just glad he grew and one of my favourite things of the story was his character development.

My wife and I had a chance to swap with another couple. I’ll admit to being tempted, but soon pictured my wife with the other man.

Threw a big wet blanket on my imagination quickly.

Sex with my wife might not be all that good, but I love her too much to ever swap.

Bill

Pathetic cuck

Very good story. The author knows how to pull the heart strings and to round out a character. Using the Iraq situation to build his character and compassion was brilliant. To the naysayers... they are just despicable illiterate assholes. However, the anal sex was totally unnecessary. 5 stars.

Very good series. Well written and challenging storyline.

One slight mistake, it's not easy to change a birth certificate and to add a fathers name. In fact I'm not sure if it's possible. More likely is that Shawn would have had to adopt Gina. Otherwise they would be making a false declaration and could face criminal charges.

I like your storytelling; just not the RAAC story... In my opinion, he is just another Cuck.

What a piece of crap... I normally like your stories but that was not up to snuff. Just don't see any reason to reconcile with her. She didn't seem that interested in being married to him, would rather he'd moved on and his family would stop stabbing him in the back.

I'm sorry. I just could never do it.

Love for your fellow man and caring for needy kids is completely different than having to look at and raise a child every single day...knowing it was a bastard conceived by my wife and another man? No matter the context in which the conception happened. Tragic as it might have been.

I raised 5 kids. It's hard. It's challenging some days to cope with all of the little things that kids do to challenge your sanity. The teen years? Catching them sneaking out of the house.. Lieing to my face about things. Talking back.. Crashing my car.. Catching one with weed. Catching them drunk. And these were kids that I KNOW are mine. And in general are good kids. They just pushed limits and boundaries like all kids do.

Now...if they were not my kids biologically? Concieved in this way by another man?? And it was obvious based on racial features...and a pissed off teenage girl in the heat of an argument says "I hate you. You aren't my real dad anyway!"

Some have it in them to be able to cope with raising another man's child in this situation. Good for them. Myself? I do not have it in me. Nope. Wouldn't even try.

Good luck to you babe. I really did love you. And thousands of babies are adopted every week successfully and into loving homes. If you loved me enough...you would NEVER ask me to raise another man's child and be reminded every day that you gave birth to a bastard child and loved it more than you loved me. So yep. It's tragic. It could have been a good life together. But it's not happening now. Good luck to you. You are young. You'll find someone else. I'll be fine eventually and I will find someone else too. Oh...and by the way...stay the fuck away from my family. My mom and sister especially. You decided to keep the kid and raise it yourself. So don't expect me to halp you out. I don't need the painful reminder of you in my life.. I don't need my family in constant touch with you. And then passing that shit on to me because they think I should raise a bastard like some God damn cuckold piece of shit. If you and the kid stay in their life? Then I'm gonna have to cut them outta mine. And why should I have to lose my family over your stupid decisions.

Full stop.

Read this again.

Liked it more this time. I revised my earlier score from 2/5 to 4/5

Cannot really understand why l thought so little of this tale earlier

What a bitch of a mother withholding vital and life altering information, like the possibility of being sterile.

I seriously don't understand why 'plan b' wouldn't be a mandatory thing to take right after a swap, no matter how good or shitty the actual swap was. Not that the swap should have taken place in the first place.

As for going back and raising somebody else's bastard by way of your wife...well...if you can do it, fair play to you, but i could never do it. It just isn't in me and i'm pretty disappointed in the RAAC crowd, tough i like a good RAAC myself sometimes. There's some situations that you just can't get back from.

Never stop writing.

It certainly took a very long time for this writing to develop. However, it got better and better as the story moved along. I started with a low rating for the earlier chapters but my overall rating is a five star.

BJ

This is a comment on the commenters below- 'just another cuck story'. Are you freakin' nuts? Either you idiots don't even know what the word means, or you are so hypocritically off-center that if you were stood on your head, you still wouldn't know which end was up. Imbeciles. And a 5 for the story.

HOw do you pronounce the baby's full name? Michael Ed-WARD WARD ??

5 stars. Well written. In the beginning I was wondering where this story was going. You did a hell of a good job in the following chapters and the conclusion. Two idiots finally grew up (well, one idiot-him) and straightened out their lives.

It was a wonderful story of how a mistake was made and the following consequences of that mistake. She should have never let Shawn push her into it but I guess that is a hard lesson learned. The result of that mistake was a pregnancy and divorce that should have never happened in the first place. He ran off to Afghanistan and did some true sole searching and then grew up and did the right thing by accepting Gina as his daughter and remarrying Julie. The ending was great with the happily ever after. Gets my 5-star vote

"Shawn, I love you and you really are going to be a daddy again." No, Shawn was not the "daddy" the first time. The LW cliche about "sperm donors vs fathers" is simple minded feminist horseshit. Of course the entire problem with this story is that the author came up with a novel, morally and emotionally complicated plot device (gave him a 5 for that), but he wrote the rest of the story on "LW autopilot" using LW cliche after LW cliche. The important, interesting issues were overlooked, and, instead, we got a hackneyed continuation and resolution that doesn't connect in any important way with the interesting issues the author raised at the beginning.

Cuck...

Good story - bad ending. Should have let the divorce stand and lived some where far away to start over. People make mistakes - some are not recoverable.

Gotta love the commenters who've all lived such virtuous lives that they've never made a mistake. Especially when they were young.

Also live the commenters that don't bash the story but, only condemn Shawn as having made a mistake.

Shawn did make mistakes. No doubt. Letting the swap happen was a huge mistake. Running out on Julie was obviously a mistake. But, honestly for a very young man it was understandable. Especially since he never knew about Julie having an abortion when she was 18. I know when he proposed she tried to talk about her past and he shut her down. But, the first time he brought up what if the baby was Mario's she should have told him and let him know that she could never give up another baby no matter what.

Julie letting Mario cum inside her and not telling Shawn about her abortion were huge mistakes on her part.

The swap with Mario and Maria happened on her 21st birthday. Shawn was only a year or two older. They were kids. They made some bad mistakes.

Most importantly, they grew up and learned from their mistakes and ended up with the person they loved and had a happy family.

Interesting story following the growth and maturation process of a loving couple.

I do not get why so many commenters blame the wife and think they should not have reconciled. They both did something stupid with the swap but it seemed like Shawn was more on board with it and his wife did it to please him. She didn't have any feeling for Mario. Weird double standard for some.people.

I have know a couple of people who reconciled after stupid shit so this is very believable. 5*

Great Story! Loved It!!

I too accepted two wonderful baby girls into my life and raised them as though they were my own, that is as long as their mom and I were together for 8 years. I just couldn't tolerate the lying, cheating, and her family always butting into our marriage without her defending me from them. That's been so many years ago, and their mom has passed away, but we were still on friendly speaking terms. Those two girls have their one families and they still call and visit me. Of course I do have two kids of my own now, and they are grown too, and have their own homes, and they accepted those two girls as their family as well.

'Wildbill

What nitpic said.

What nitpic said.

Hmm. Struggling to complete a post here.

“Sweetheart, if you want to keep me you have to be willing to let the other man’s baby be adopted. Your call.”

“No I can’t give up this baby”

“Too bad. If you put me first, you could have kept both of us. I just had to know I was first. Best wishes and have a great life. Adios.”

I just had to know who was first in your heart.

I am not one for raising someone else’s child, however he really screwed over his wife… Hey honey I want to Rick Maria so be a cum dump for this asshole. Jesus how liw can one guy stoop? Sorry he was a coward bug the writers tale was “So Good” is made up for the husbands character flaws.

1 star - sick cuck/slut crap - too bad that children were involved - makes it 10 times worse

Well written, an enjoyable read.

The author's note says it well. People make mistakes, especially younger one. I was a very rough diamond as a late 20s-early 30s man, or so my wife of 30 years tells me. Found out about a daughter by an old girlfriend who never told me until she was 26. THAT threw a big issue on the table for my wife as a childless couple. The old girlfriend (actually then a fiancee) said it wasn't about that rough me but her family who preferred another suitor and she was "weak" over the family religion (self-described). That also involved some stupid, youthful swapping of which she didn't know offspring parentage until much later. But that messed with my mind and a loyal, loving wife kept me sane. Yes, life can throw serious curve balls and mistakes happen. But the Ex, her daughter, my wife, and I became friends ultimately after visits and forgave all. Imagine meeting a biological daughter with her own daughter almost 30 years later after being childless! So this DG Hear story struck a chord. Thanks.

I liked it, and gave all 3 parts 5 stars each. My wife and I have been married to each other for over 40 years, and we could have just as easily aborted my daughter when we were still teenagers. But we didn't. I married my wife about 2 months before my daughter was born, and never looked back. After my son was born, we had a long talk and decided she would get her tubes tied as our insurance would cover it. For about the first 20 years on our anniversary I'd ask her if she regretted not being able to have any more kids. She'd tell me no, the 2 we have is enough, and she's looking forward to grand kids.

he wouldv of been fine without her but she needed him, julie had too many flaws he should of walked away

My first reaction was they are still too young and immature to get married and now they have a second child. I really don't think this guy will be able to deal with Gina now that "his" son is born. He will compare. He will see the stupid mistake that they n=both made every time he see's Gina. Adopting children is different as you go into it knowing you are doing this as a family for the love of the child etc. His wife gave birth to a child not his own because of what they BOTH did. Big difference and I am glad he owes up to it now but has enough time gone by?

Yeah, we all make mistakes, but he just keeps on making them, and the same ones over and over. Let’s see now who should father my wife’s next child?

The only real question is whether DG prefers panties or thongs

I can't believe the negative comments below. Shawn made a mistake and saw the light. Julie

did what most mothers would of done and chose her child.

I think that both sides of these “comment argument” have it wrong IMO. They were young, mistakes were made, she got pregnant with another man’s child. Fine, shit happens no one needs to be burned at the stake over it.

At the same time, he’s perfectly within his rights to not want to raise another man’s child. In Kuwait he saw a man raise his old girlfriend’s son but that was different. Both he and the gf moved on and had married others. Then one couple is killed and so after talking to his wife the Kuwaiti man takes in the orphan child. It’s not the same.

Both Julie and her ex had a right and the ability to move on. Like the Bree character in a previous story did. I’m guessing DG wanted to do something different in this one, it just doesn’t work for me. The story is fine, I just don’t buy the plot.

Thx for writing this. Love your style. Love to see you write again

Good read, happy ending, mistakes? I make em every day. Just look at the fucking world, misery everywhere.

I'm glad this was fiction as I too have seen kids in war zones and every marine I know would empty their 782 gear to find treats to bring just an iota of happiness to them.

Thanks

jack

I loved the story. They were young getting married and made a mistake. Then he made another one asking her to choose between the baby and him, but good for him/them, they got it right in the end. Nearly everyone is redeemable. A happy ending is always possible when real love is involved. Thanks for writing

I almoat expexted her 2nd kid to be black!

Shawn pulled out. Julie let Mario cum in her even though she knew she was not on birth control.

Good story, I liked it. Nice happy ending. But I'll tell you this, I would never swap my wife but if by some crazy drunken chase we did that just like in the story, then it's absolutely impossible that I would forget to go to Walgrens the next day and by a morning after pill....but then there wouldn't be a story to tell

lost a bit of steam as the story went on. nice story but not a ton of drama outside the really bad mistake and fallout.

Thanks

Nice to read a happy ending story once in a while..

Shawn was a saint, and I can't criticize that. The notion that he did anything wrong or had to apologize, however, is stupid. I don't see much in Julie at all. She got lucky