All Comments on 'A Swapping Mistake'

what could go wrong,good work.

This story grabbed my interest and held it because it was not just about sex. The writer turned this into a great, and realistic story. True talent!

for quite a while now. Count on DG Hear to turn that around. A new idea, well crafted, complete with some suspense leaves us anxious for the next chapter. As always, it's a great day when you have a new DG Hear story to read.

This story is in four chapters. One will be posted each day. Is was to long for one post. It's different but I hope you enjoy it. Your comments and feedback are always welcome. I do understand that not every story is for everyone.

DG Hear

I can't fault your story craftsmanship, or your writing. I do ask though, where do you come up with such stupid characters? I find it hard to believe that a man could act in such an ignorant way. Kinda seems like he doesn't really love anyone but his own self righteous image of who he thinks he is. What kind of a man cannot love a child whose conception was caused by his own selfish desires and actions. I think I'd call him a damned hypocrite and a bigot

as well. If you are going to add more to this story, it might be great if Julie finds a real man whose love for her is not so shallow.

Looking forward to the next few parts. Thanks for the story.

Is it Iraq or is it Kuwait? What the needs to be rebuilt in Kuwait - they have plenty of money. Unless this is supposed to set just after Gulf War I why even bother saying Kuwait?

I wish that you would take the time to create more complex characters. In most of your stories that I've read I always come back with the impression that all of your characters are one dimensional. I would rather see you throttle down your output and read something with a little more meat.

I like most of your stories, DG, but this one is stupid. Oh, why do I bother, it's in the LW cat! lol I prefer your romances, makes me all warm & mushy, sometimes even teary-eyed. Anyway, for this story, why didn't she take the morning after pill if he/she/they were so worried about conception? Both of them are lacking in grey matter. I'll read the next chapters, though, just to give you the benefit of the doubt. Until then, I remain... your young & nubile fan in Europe XOXO (lol)

It's about time someone covered the other side of swapping. The regrets after the heat of the moment.

I know that many people do it, but I wonder just how much they actually love each other. Most that do it will tell you that it's only sex. You just leave the emotion and feeling out of it. Sounds simple enough, right? But what if? in an instance everything changed? No, I think that sometimes we need to hear the other side

What I liked about this story is that it hit me from out of the blue. Actually, the reality of this story felt strangely real in my opinion.... I hope this is not something this person has been involved in. As much fun as it is to talk about it's equally important to realize the consequences of your actions.... Eventually your dick will go down. Reality will set in. Then you will be left with the mental picture of some person beside you having sex with someone you DO love. You might can take the emotion out of the sex on your part...but can you take the emotion out of the connection to your spouse or loved one? I think it would be very hard....I have to say that I beg to differ the part someone calls the characters stupid...

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In this story the characters are not stupid but what they did was stupid. They are actually very human.

I am very glad that someone touched on the regrets to swapping. It's something I also have found curious...and amazingly like the author said there is very little written on the adverse issues it can cause. I thought it was very well written. Especially the part defining the emotion of regret.

jrw

Great story as ususl, well worth the top score. Immature husband needs to face his consequences and support his wife as a loving husband and father. He got her pregnant with another man's cock. It was his lack of judgement which began the swap. *****

Only a real asshole would ask a mother to choose between her child and him. It's not really the wfe's fault - it's not like she had an affair and betrayed him. My resolution for the wife would be for her to find another man who really loves her. When you love someone, doesn't that mean you want only the best for that person? Husband is selfish and wife should come to see that. When he finally understands what he has done and asks for forgiveness, perhaps there should be some resistance on her part. Does she really want such a self centred prick for a husband. *****

In real life, I never knew my father (asshole American soldier who was in Canada for cold war construction), so my ideas about owning up to what you have done has a bitter flavour. DG HEAR, thanks for a real good read.

So very well done, looking forward to Chapter 2

Thank you for the great effort in your writing

Hubby here is made to be the one that created then ran from the problem. That is good if you are a husband basher. Let's take the story a bit at a time. At what point in the adventure did the wife ever say no stop? At what point did the wife ever say no I wont fuck that guy? At what point did she demand the use of a condom knowing she couldb be impregnated? So let's not blame the husband for the situation, it was a two way street and they both traveled it. I agree with the husband, I would not raise another man's child, correction, I would not pay for raising another man's child eve if I was totally in love with the woman! He gave the wife the opportunity to give up the bastard, that is a correct term, she refused as is her choice. Nor did she chose to abort the child knowing another man could be the father. Now she refuses on the birth certificate to name the father, and prevented the husband from getting child support for the child. I am sorry but if she is in debt for another man's child her foolish pride in not getting child support from him is plain stupid! You say it was his foolish pride to leave her, well I tell you it was her foolish pride that compounded one thing into another ending in her not having the money to pay her bills. Put another way stupid people do stupid things. These two are very stupid. To blame swinging on this isnt realistic. They were not swinging they were drunk and stupid. I really liked the line about the latina living with the father of her kids but not wanting to marry because she doesnt want the commitment. That one almost got the sick laffing. Do I feel sorry about the wife with the little girl, no I dont. Do I wish she had some brains and handled it differently, hell yes I do. Do I think the exhusband is totally to blame and is responsible for his exwife's problems, no I dont. Does he need to grow up and suck it in and get on with his life hell yes I think he does. Should he be sending payments to the exwife, only if they are gifts acccepted as such with no consideration as child support payments. Most support agencies now require the mother to state the name of the father so the state can go after them for support. I find it kind of funny them gave her any support and would imagine she would get more if she named the father. Chosing to live along not with her family cost her more than she can afford, another pride choice. To bring the child to her exhusbands and for the parents and family, his, to treat the child as a grandchild is very stupid and he is right a betrayal of him and a manipulation of the family by his exwife. It would have been a much better story that way if the husband had known he was sterile and the wife and he chose someone to impregnate her for kids. The couple is divorced, he told her what she needed to do in order to stay married, she considered her options and chose door number 2. Sorry folks this story is over. (As an aside, how does the exwife, tell the exhusbands lawyer to stop pursuing the other guy since he is working for the exhusband and not her? After all her exhusband invested time, money, and insurance in her pregnancy and the birthing and it is his choice whether or not to have the guy reimburse him for those expenses, not her choice.)

Well written story. I liked the lead in and build up to the sexy part of the story as well as the outcome. One commentor wondered where the author came up with such stupid characters. Believe me the world is filled with such individuals. People do all kinds of dumb things in the heat of passion and then when the fun wears off and reality sets in their normal attitudes set in. Shawn wanted the hot neighbor and got her, but didn't bargin for the kid by another man for letting him do his own wife. His reaction is pretty real. So will be interesting to see what the next chapters bring. Swinging requires planning and preparation by all parties before hand, rules of engagement and consideration of possible negative outcomes for everyone to have fun without post swing problems. Anyway..keep it up DG, good read.

From the master. Damn, I really do enjoy your stories.

You kind of left the door open for a sequel on this one, does that mean there is going to be a part 2?

For those asking, there is a Chapter 2,3,4 which should post each day. They have all been submitted. Ch.2 is in the queue to be posted tomorrow. Lots of little twists and turns, hope you enjoy it.

Thanks for asking.

DG

job. What the people of America should understand is that the supposedly cute little Mexican immigrants coming to America are not the least bit interested in our welfare. They are an insidious people. They care for their own kind. Like many blacks they are trying to wipe the white race off the face of the map, they are succeeding because off fool like in your story...They are almost as prolific as Blacks when it comes to children. Once children are born they are precious regardless of their origin. The illegals and immigrants are the problem. The ultra liberal philosophy is another. People like the white couple here are just the tip of the iceberg. Unless white people realize that they are helping in the destruction of their race then all is lost. I am old enough that it will not really bother me in the future. But I refuse to think of what kind of a world my decendants will live in. marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

I hope to read the next chapter DG Hear.

I think Shawn and Julie both messed up they never thought of using a condom and she never once thought of the STDS that Mario could be carrying inside him and i believe that afterwards Julie was still going over to Marios place to get some from him and she lied to shawn afterwards .

Atlanta,Ga

I deal with people in this age group all the time. Most of them still have a lot to learn about life and I believe that DG is doing a good job of portraying the process.

I wonder if they were normally practicing condom sex or subconsciously believed that she could not get pregnant.

I do believe the author missed an opportunity to follow the psychological steps of rejection of swapping.

still remember that time. its nobodys fault. but it was a bit of a chaos for a month before the emotions calmed down. it also helped us to lay off the alcohol. the threat of STDs and pregnancy gave me nightmares. hey, live to learn.

DG you're becoming a softy! Usually you cut the heart of of the bitch for your guy's mistake. But as usual I have to re-re-read the story several times not to hate the guy and remember it is only words on paper.

I dont like this story at all.. the PLOT hole is just too big. When Shawn told his family in the delivery room about the drunk wfe swapping event... and why the baby is NOT his... <b>why didnt ANY of them say to him... hey asshole this is YOUR fault? </b>.

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SECOND Sometimes in cheating wives stories the author makes the wife actions words and behavior IS awful and digs such a hole that it makes any Reconciliation idea/ scenario to be impossible.

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this is very much what DG has done here but this time its with the Husband. The husband reaction -- that's not MY kid-- given the sequence of events is Unreasonable and hateful.

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They were BOTH drunk. He was ASKED by Mario to swap... the Husband was NOT tricked in anwyay. He could of said NO... keep your cock out of my wife. Instead he said Nothing.

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The truth is BOTH of them are at fault... the Husband and the wife's but that is NOT what he is saying or acting.

you reap what you sow, for both parties. Either of them could of walked away with an STD, just because he pulled out of the other man's wife, didn't make the sex any safer. Plus either of them could have set the precedent by saying, "don't come in me/her". She didn't want to murder the fetus which shouldn't be blamed for the stupidity of the couple, her choice. Don't under estimate the mental, emotional, physical and many times spiritual power of carrying a child full term. Tossing it aside afer (giving it up for adoption say) is not so easy. Sure the husband is happy...maybe, seems a lot of underlying issues here. He chose not to live with her choice, so be it.

So what if she still sees her ex-in-laws? She's probably trying to surround herself with people who can give her emotional support. Being a single parent is tough, but yet again, her choice. I don't remember reading anywhere that they were treating the kid as if it really was their grand baby, financially or other wise.

Can't blame her for not wanting a highly suspect character like Mario be involved with the child's life. Seemed she was willing to live with the financial hardship. The ex husband seemed willing to help out financially without having any real obligation to, and despite how he felt about the child.

I think this could just of easily happened to an older more established couple, especially when booze and drugs are thrown into the mix, which could skew anyone's perspective.

All in all I think they both made the choices they felt they needed to make to live with the repercussions of their actions. End of story. But I'm sure this will evolve into some convoluted drama about how she'd been cheating with Mario (the seeds of doubt have been planted) all along and Shawn did well to pack up and leave and move on with his life.

Hope yu write a chapter two where they make up.

I hope your children learn to love others in spite of the bigotry you are instilling in them so they could actually learn to make and live in a world that is better than this one.

this story was interesting as for the realism how people do things without forethought and then cannot accept the consequences!

Why is it in these stories the wife is always unprotected. The fact is, most couples use birth control. In addition there is a pill called plan B. Emergency contraception. Has no one heard of this! I would have found this story much easier to stomach if Julie had taken the pill the following day. You could then have written that the pill failed to block the pregnancy. Finally, you make the main charachter a total idiot! I cannot stomach him. If I was the husband here, my first concern would be weather or not the baby was mine. I would probably tell my wife to abort the pregnancy, come what may. In addition, the action of his parents in witholding knowledge that he might be sterile was unconscionable!!!! If my parents did that to me, I WOULD NEVER SPEAK TO THEM AGAIN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

One more point. Weather or not a child receives support is NOT up to the parents. Child support is an entitlement of the child. Julie and Hubby would forced by a local court order to reveal who the father is. Mario would be paying for the next eighteen years. NO SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!! Julie would have no say in the matter.

PISSED IN WISCONSIN

Great story DG. Loved it. Had a realistic feel to it. Keep pounding the keys. LOL

As usual the story is well written, but in this one I can't like any of the characters. Not the husband, the wife, or the parents that did not tell him he probably was sterile. Hard to stay interested in a story where you can't like anyone!

I can't remember the last time I read a bad DG Hear story. He is a master storyteller In this story,though, it's difficult to feel any sympathy for Shawn who is portrayed in your story as a pompous, selfish husband who encourages his wife to swap with letcherous friend and then is viciously critical when he think her new baby has been fathered by Mario. when she refuses to give baby up for adoption he divorces her and leaves the country.I saw no indication that any DNA tests were down to prove the baby was not his only tests apparently showing that he had low sperm count and would have difficulty conceiving child, that and his conclusion based on baby complexion, that Mario had to be father. Even a fine writer like DG is going to have trouble generating any sympathy for arrogant Shawn.

60 year old George

WOW! I've never read such a sad story before ... thanks for sharing the downside of swinging. Most of us know in the back of our mind the undesirable possibilities that can happen. But to read about it happening is totally different.

This story certainly gets the dilemma award for the week! I suspect there will be some type of reconciliation as such seems to frequently happen in DGH's stories. I wish the story had been labeled "Ch. 01" so the reader would have the option to postpone reading until all four chapters were submitted. I've read all comments so far and agree with some. I think both Julie and Shawn share blame, but I feel the fault is more Shawn's than Julie's. He did start the swap and as he admitted, he let the small head rather than the large head do his thinking for him. Julie could have blamed him but didn't; she accepted what happened. By the way, Mumps does not cause male infertility unless the male is past puberty; since Shawn was a child when he had it, the chance he would be infertile from Mumps is virtually zero. Rheumatic fever does not cause damage to the testicles in the child or adult; it can damage the heart valves but it is not a known cause of male infertility. Finally, it is my understanding that if a consensual sexual act results in pregnancy, and the father is not named, in a number of states (possibly not all -- I'm not a lawyer and can't say for certain) the husband is considered the legal father of the child, even if he is not the biologic father. As another commented, the courts are interested in protecting the child and Shawn might very well have been required to support the child.

The story is horrible. She shuda dumped his ass before they got married and enjoyed herself for a while when she was still young. If I want a bleeding heart story I will read a romance novel.

Agreed. This story is horribly wrong for this site. I come to this site to be aroused. Of course things can go horribly wrong, that's just common sense. But I don't need to read about some asshole who ruined three people's lives by not being smart enough to say, "hey buddy, she's not on the pill, so don't come in her, ok?" Take that depressing shit somewhere else.

for the sake of hoping this gets better, I'm going to read on. but this sounds like some horrible "poor me, i'm a single mother, let your hearts bleed sympathy for me" type of story. maybe my point of view is wrong right now, but maybe it's not.

Latino is a fucking MAN....how the fuck could MariA have a latino look? That's not proper Spanish, man. Also, could you have found better names? Mario and Maria? Come on...that's fucking unimaginative.

You suck.I couldn't even read the first page. Thats how bad you suck.

Silly story about a fellow who can't take the fact that his wife screwed someone else & carried the child to term. He can't raise someone else's child, despite the fact that the mother is the woman he loves? This stupidity is the product of the monogamistic ethic that really should be abandoned, particularly by the readers of Literotica!

I was not surprised when I read the story to its bitter end. There is a moral law in life that "you reap as you sow". This story ought to be a loud trumpet blast to young folks who play fast and loose with immorality. I'm not being judgmental as I was young myself once, and almost as foolish. But I've lived long enough to know that that moral law is set in stone, and will always be fulfilled.

oh go fuck yourself australia. yea, he made a mistake but his wife went along with it and while he shouldnt have made that ultimatum, if he cant stand to raise another mans baby, then he should leave otherwise their relationship would sour and the kid would have an unhappy life. also, it was pretty fucked up that his mom knew he was sterile and even said she figured her daughter in law slept with another man and then kept seeing her after the divorce. frankly, depending on where this story goes-like if they stay divorced-then his family is gonna have a hard choice to make, their son or his ex wife.

total limp dick story

Shawn has the right idea. They both made a mistake, but julia let a man shoot his sperm into her when she knewshe was fertile. As soon as she knew she was prenant they shold have had it aborted. They didn't, if Julia truely loved her husband she would have given the bastard baby up for adoption, by not doing so it proves that she loves that Mario more than her husband

They compound ignorance of unprotected sex with passing on an abortion; too stupid to be parents

I don't understand why a woman would risk pregnancy by a man who isn't her husband even if she was drunk. Surely she knew she could get pregnant? We are all responsible for our own actions. If Maria had gotten pregnant, it would be Shawn's responsibility. It was Julie's responsibility to not get pregnant. Yes, I think Shawn was an asshole for letting this happen, but he didn't force his wife to have sex.

I do think women can't have it both ways. Either she's a mature independent woman making her own decisions, or she's subservient to her husband and obeys him. I don't think there are many of the 2nd kind of women around, and I don't think I'd really want to be married to one. So that leaves the responsibility for having sex squarely on the shoulders of those who did it. And that's Julie. Trying to blame it on Shawn is acting like Julie doesn't have free will.

Shawn is partly responsible, but Julie has to bear most of the responsibility. She slept with another man and didn't take care of the birth control. You can't get around that. Surely when she woke up sober the first thing she would have done is go get a morning after pill. She didn't. And yes, something like carrying another man's child does often cause divorce.

What is up with all this crying shit ? It made me cry , I mean shit, how many guys do you know that weap ? I might cry if mom died , or my dad .or my kids . but for fuck sake ,crying over a cheating slut . not

i take it that shawn has decided to never have kids, nor marry a woman who has - or even wants - kids. right? because the only way he can raise a kid at all is if it was someone else's.

i've already lost any empathy i had for the main character. why do LW authors make the husband so stupid and weak all the time (then try to hide it behind some whiny sensitive malarkey)?

You and her fucked up. She made a choice so she needs to live with it. In 25 years the kid will be grown and moved away. If she chose her husband, in 40 years he would still be with you. Love your kids, but treat your spouse better. They are going to be with you forever, or they should be.

putting the thing up for adoption. you can keep the bastard or me but not both. she chooses the bastard - kiss her ass good by and never give her a penny. shit happens.

she took a risk of pregnancy with another man there is no accident there. So she chose to keep the baby he gave her a choice him or the child and she chose.

They were married not like she had kids before so it was while married she got knocked up.

good riddance

If this guy ends up raising gina i swers to god you will lose all respect from me not as a writer butcas a man.

Any man who cannot raise another man's child, especially since he was as guilty as she was is not a man.

... I have two children, both are adopted. In the 30 years, I've never regretted it. You people are cry-baby wimps. Panther fans.

He pull his wife in to his hell now they both paid the price . She should had never took the risk of having that child . She new the risk she is not stupid. And he made the bed. so now laid on she was allways true to him still the very end. He should put love first .allways that child might had been chance at been a father .

Then no story of course.

What is wrong with you people? Shawn chose to do the swapping so he could fuck Maria, now try carrying a baby in your stomach for nine months just to give it up. So if you ask me Shawn was an asshole in this story giving her that bloody ultimatum WHEN he's the reason they swapped, so the ten grand "gift" at the end should have been used to pay off debts and set Julie on a new life since she can move on and find a better man. But some you are treating this like she cheated which pisses me off, if anything, SHAWN should be the one you all tear to shreds since he wanted Maria and swapped with Mario, he actually fucked Maria while his wife was stoned and fucked by Mario (which was SHAWN's doing that he made clear throughout) so he doesn't deserve Julie.

THEY did -

Re-read it HE knew she was unprotected - he thought about it and just kept fucking Maria - he never said anything before during or after - BUT stoned or not he did think about and decided to do nothing then -

He now decides it is her problem and he is not accountable - BULLSHIT

He apparently cannot have children (he might ought to find out about that for sure BTW) and might WANT Gina as a daughter - as it might be his only chance to have a child.

BUT he is a dick -

Shawn, you need to remarry Julie and stop thinking about yourself. Be the man, you are responsible for the baby Julie gave birth to. You knew what you were doing when Mario said, "Lets swap." Don't abandoned your marriage covenant (a promise) to love Julie for better or worse. You keep saying that you can't raise another man's kid, but just exactly what do you think you would be doing if you had to adopt because you are potentially sterile? At least this way the baby is half Julie's. You did say you loved her and that she is the best thing to ever happen to you! Where's the problem?

Step up and do the right thing by Julie.

The pussy is already cracking under a little pressure from him mom. Won't be long now, soon he'll the proud provider for someone else's mistake!

So many comments bitching and whining about how he should "man up", and raise another man's kid. Why should he? It's not his responsibility, if his wife is a moron! She said it herself. Nobody put a gun to her head. She consented to have sex. Just because her husband was there doesn't make him in any way responsible for her pregnancy.He was busy fucking someone else at the time. SHE is the one that had unprotected sex with a stranger, albeit with common consent from all involved. But, and it is a BIG but. IT IS NOT HER HUSBAND'S RESPONSIBILITY TO ENSURE SHE USES PROTECTION ! His wearing a condom won't stop another man's seed impregnating her! Unless she is mentally deficient, and he is legally her guardian, then it is HER responsibility to use protection.

If the guy doesn't want to raise another man's kid, that is HIS CHOICE! Everyone rattles on about it being a woman's body, a woman's choice. Well men get to make choices too. Nobody was bitching about her decision to keep the kid. Guys get no say in those decisions. Or is it only women that get a choice. If he doesn't want the kid, that's for him to decide, not anyone else. He bears absolutely zero responsibility for the kid. If it's mother can't pay for it, that's her problem. She CHOSE to keep it, and she CHOSE not to seek child support from its father. Deal with it.

Here is a tale where everyone involved was wrong. If you're swapping you better be protected. A logical answer to save the marriage was to give up the baby for adoption. However there is no logic involved when love for a baby is involved. So he left. I won't judge this nor will I rate it until I read further...

Julie didn't cheat on him behind his back, the two of them went into that swapping encounter together. One way or the other, they both made that kid happen.

"We began with hospitals and schools. I even worked late at night trying to make life a little more bearable for these people. I felt good doing my part to help restore these buildings and help these casualties of war. They were just innocent people who were bombed by some of their own people"

Most of these casualties of war became casualties of war as a result of the Invasion and occupation of their country, by the US and the coalition of the bribed. The US had and has no intention of restoring the country.

More like they were stupid. Guess he's learning the lesson all adults learn. You're responsible for your life. You mess it up, you're the one to blame. Stupidity runs amok.

Never lend your car your tools and never your wo5225man never dumbass

it was a great depiction, of 2 young people trying hard not to grow up, but being pulled towards it by their own love. great story.

an interesting storyline. Thanks.

would end it for me. Her choice, then mine. Had there been long deliberation, and a painful realization, maybe I'd stick around. But that peremptory ? It is her choice to not consider her husband's state of mind, but she gets to live with the aftermath of saying in effect "I don't CARE what you feel."

That she would KEEP her daughter from her rightful father seals my opinion: Julie is a neglectful asshole, keeping secrets and deliberately impoverishing her own child. What a selfish P.O.S. Not for the sex act, but for the self-centered, self-absorbed behavior that came afterward. It's not about her daughter, it's not about her husband, it's not about their marriage, it's only about what Julie wants.

Donald Trump told us to watch out for those spicy Mexicans. They can whip up a baby as fast as guacamole. But really? I've seen white grandmothers pushing their Black grand children around in the grocery basket at the grocery store. Why would a Latino child be singled out as being so undesirable? Could it be that politics has eroded our brains to the point that we make bad decisions for our own good?

Some guys don't want to raise another man's child. That doesn't make them bad people. They are just being true to their own beliefs. It was Julie's choice, whether or not she she wanted to keep the baby, just as it was Shawn's choice whether or not he would raise it. Neither was wrong, and neither deserved any blame, as regards the divorce. They BOTH were to blame for the manner in which the child was conceived.

I wonder, if Julie would have stayed, if the roles were reversed, and Shawn had impregnated Maria, and then insisted on being a part of the baby's life? There are just as many women out there, that wouldn't stay, in that situation. That doesn't make them bad, it just makes them human.

He instigated it to get into Maria's pants and now he wants to disown his own actions. Pathetic character. I find story distasteful as a result and writing a bit unrefined 3*

I just hope that in real life idiots like these two doesn't exist. Who the fuck swaps without a thought to birth control?

And what a fucking asshole he was! What does it mean "she had a choice"? How can he imagine that she can give away her child? Like it's all her fault? He didn't have any problem screwing Maria. Grow a pair, damn pathetic wimp!

Asshole husband really pissed me off. 1/5

he and she made an immature decision, which they are both paying for, that's a given. hind sight is 20/20. I know some 80 year olds that have yet to grow up. a good story and a good lesson to be learned.

Unprotected sex, well shit happens want to fix go to the doctor and get the morning after pill.

But then I guess there is no story.

Julie holds just as much responsibility as Mario. She could have told him to pull out. She knowing that she was not on birth control, when he didn't. Shawn was unsure and did the right thing. Fuck that bitch.

hmmm pull out but u actually can still get pregnant doing that too just not a very big chance also why would she keep the kid over her husband? even if it was there mistake which it was....he says no kid or no him so hmmmmm you can always have another kid???????? even if he is sterile only a dumfuck picks a 2 day old human over a spouse that she supposedly loves....other then that good story though

Men have been raising children not their own since time beyond memory or record. In this story the self-centered anti-hero was fully complicit in the exchange of wives and is thus just as responsible for the pregnancy as was his wife. A child comes into the world innocent and helpless, and has a right to be loved and cared for by the human race in general regardless of the details of whose sperm and ova. Some South Pacific cultures did not identify fatherhood and considered all children to belong to the entire tribe or village. That is a more decent and 'civilized' way of life than the obsession of men with passing on their genes to the extreme degree of abandoning a new mother and newborn child like this lowlife piece of shit did. A decent resolution would have been to describe the child as adopted if his fragile, bloated ego required that to avoid being embarrassed by the child's appearance. This is from a true bastard who has been there and experienced that.

He takes no responsibility for his actions and role in this. He was thinking with the wrong head. Nothing would have happened if he hadn't wanted Maria; Shawn is the cheater and the looser. Hope this resolves itself positively by Shawn needs to grow up and become a man.

If its not his kid why pay for it at all. she made her decision and now she's on her own. oh well for her.

He wants to forgive her but the baby.Eventually his love for her will make his feelings change for the baby.

Shawn's mother is. She has no problems keeping information which is critical to her son's emotional well being for years, yet as soon as that same son asks her to keep her yap shut about who the money's coming from, she says "No, Shawn, I'm not lying to her. We'll tell her the truth." That shows to me where her loyalties lie. Not with her own offspring, but with an EX daughter in-law. I'd have said, "Thanks for nothing, Mom. Have a good life." *CLICK.* And then I'd find some way of emigrating and never going home again.

Really good writing, I am involved. About the subject, why do all thes wronged men turn into whiny crybabies when something bad happens? Dude, accept that life isn't fair. No one said it had to be. You had your dick in the other guys wife and watched the guy cum in her. Didn't you take sex education?

And you promised to take care of her in good times and bad! She should be able to depend on you. Your self righteous attitude makes me sick.

Grow up!

Life is about choices. He made his, she made hers. Now they have live with it.

This story has absolutely no business being on an adult erotic website. It’s nothing more than a bleeding heart, soap opera load of hooey that should be a movie of the week on the Lifetime tv network or a holiday chick-flick on the Hallmark channel. Regardless of where it should be, it shouldn’t be here on Literotica.

Wife swapping is never a great idea and the people who do it or think it is are complete idiots. However, this dude is also an idiot. Hes the one who allowed it. His pussy ass needs to manup and take back his wife and child. If he didnt want the dude to cum in her he shoukd have said something but he didnt. Accept the consequences and move on. Its impossible to put that kind of ultimatum on a good woman who loves and wants children. A mother who is a decent woman will not choose a man over her babies...ever. Manup and keep her if he loves her. Be the father he wanted to be. No sympathy from me regarding his feelings here whatsoever. Its on him

This started out as a nice story, until he started making unreasonable demands on his wife. Then. Firstly let me say that even if you and your wife watch porn it doesn't give anybody the right to bring porn into your house. Shawn should have put his foot down right away, But nooo. He wanted Maria. Who took his wife shirt and bra off? it wasn't Julie herself. and who pulled her pants and panties off also? When Mario said "Lets switch." Why didn't he tell him that he wanted to do Maria but didn't want him doing Julie? And why didn't he tell Mario not to cum inside Julie? Maybe because he was to preoccupied with Maria and what she was doing to him. Now he puts Julie on a spot and demands that she give up her baby? It's all JUlie's fault now?

I liked the story. I don't much like the main character. He is kind of a pussy. He pulls his wife into the swapping scenario and then when she comes up pregnant he makes her make a choice between the baby and him. What new mother is going to choose the asshole over the baby? He is very selfish and narrow minded. Men raise children that aren't theirs every day and love them like they are their own. I agree with commenters that I don't know why such a story is on LitEROTICA.

Any man who would share his other half is suffering from temporary insanity. The confusion of the mind is unexplainable. But when the crushing blow from reality kicks in,the husband has to accept the fact he destroyed the purity of their relationship.

Other the other hand, some guys are into that. Not my cup of tea. Which is why this story is entertaining.

The author is screwing with the readers head. He attacks and overwhelms the readers sense abilities of fair play and moral construct.

That is an art.

Don't feel any sympathy for either one. Swapping is a bad mistake.

Contrary to 26thNC, the blame was primarily on the idiot husband, which is the twist that makes the plot so strong. Good example of playing stupid games and winning stupid prizes.

Julie made her choice. Regarding the sex and regarding the baby. But he would have had to PROVE that he wasn't the Father of the baby and when asked, disclose the Father's name. The Courts want a child to have a Father - if for no other reason than to support the chi;d so the State doesn't have to. So the ending was nonsense.

This is just part 1 and so more is coming. But, I cannot understand why Shawn did not suggest a morning after pill if he saw Julie being impregnated while fertile. Shawn is at fault for starting the swapping and for stupidity. Now, the baby is the victim of Shawn's assholism.

Frankly, if he was my son, we would be very estranged because that is not my son.

What an idiot.

@Anonymous Re: "Shawn should have eaten the cum" I don't know how quickly the sperm enters the cervix, or how much cum is in range of his tongue, but I don't believe that cunnilingus is an effective birth control.

It was hard to read the last part if this story.. and yes I teared up.. I was dating/engaged to my high school sweetheart... she wanted to fuck everything and everyone..I had ultra conservative religious parents and had a strict 12 midnight curfew.. she had none... she would arrange for guys to watch when I left her house and then come to her place and she'd fuck them in the driveway.. the local bowling alley was the teen hangout back then. she also went there after I left and fucked all my buddies I ran with.. she did most of the basketball team also... she ended up pregnant.. it wasn't mine... I had a choice similar to this guy.. I decided to marry her and pretend it was mine.. I was not real pleased with my decision..so I made one rule.. if it was a boy he would be named the same as the father... We made our wedding plans...then she had a miscarriage and the problem was gone.. We went ahead with the wedding...that was 48 years ago this month and we are still very much in love ..

Yet another husband only interested in himself and his image. His mother was right, he was to immature to be married. He has no idea about the bond between a mother and her child, it wasn't like she cheated on him, it was his perverted idea that ended up with her pregnant. What an assshole.

The wife let's the guy pop off inside her and does not use the morning after pill and this guy had the good sense to pull out at least out of the other woman. Garbage story of course how he never questions his wife letting the man cum in her and then not getting the morning after pill, o and of course his family see the ex and the child every week , rolls eyes. These stories are always the same, a weak husband with an unsupportive family to their own son with no brains.

He could pull out and the other guy did not and his wife did not make him either and then the wife does not get the morning after pill. Of course.

He repeatedly warned her that the baby may not be his but she insisted to keep it and even when she saw he was right she want to keep it and she doesn't want a her real father to contribute...and his family is siding with he ..fuck them all.

. . . he thought he was being cuckolded while he was fucking Maria. In effect, he thought it was OK for himself to get some strange, but he didn’t like his wife doing the same thing.

Wonderful.

Coal burning whore loves her boyfriends baby MUCH more than her husband .

Disgusting skank

One star

This is a story it's not real life. The anon's who add sick negative comments are just scum. In the story Shawn allows what happened and, if this was real life, would have to man up and accept he was ultimately responsible for what happened.

I don't particularly like this authors storylines having read a few however, this is a well written and challenging story.

The man was STUPID for agreeing to swap!!! I would have also divorced her!!!

Decent story. Author can write. But I can already see where it's going. He'll get all mushy about his ex. Come home and just fall in love with the little bastard girl...cause she is just so sweet. How could he hate on her? And they will reconcile. But only after he profusely apologizes to the ex. Because it's his fault.

Here's the bullshit. It's not his fault. He pulled out when he was fucking Maria. His slut wife was orgasming like crazy getting fucked by Mario. She knew she wasn't in birth control. She knew she was in her fertile period. What grown woman doesn't know? She knew Mario had fathered kids. But she was being pounded like a 2 dollar whore...so instead of telling him to pull out...she just let it happen. Her fault. She got pregnant by another man.

No way in hell any real man raises another man's kid. Ever. Looking at the child day after day...year after year. Especially since he can't father any other kids apparently? It'd eat at you. No way. Not believable. Tragic. Sure. But has to be. Divorce and find another woman. He's young. Making good money. There are so many fish in the sea. Move on with your life.

His ex made her choice. She chose the child. Could have put it up for adoption. Maybe next time she is fucking a stranger when she's fertile she'll make him use a condom or tell him to pull out.

His decision should be easy. Work overseas for a few years. Bank his money. Buy a house. A nice car. Find another woman and move on.