All Comments on 'A Teacher's Pen'

The story is solid, and has the potential for the teacher to teach her student everything he needs to know over the summer to enter college as a confident young man. However, that ending just... it is very lacking. An inexperienced boy kissing a beautiful woman (especially one he has been lusting for) for the first time does not engage in a lover's kiss. His kiss is either frightened and timid or exuberant and hungry. Just my two cents.

Thanks for reading :) glad you enjoyed it! I see what you mean about the ending being quite out of place, it was my first story of this nature so I will revisit it and rework the ending.

This story was perfect. Short, single-paged, hot, and ever mans dream

Loved the story but needs more chapters/

Well, there has to be a legal way for female teachers to fall in love and romance with younger male students. I don't know, why the Western countries make such a fuss of this when they have all other kinds of adulterous affairs going on.

For example, today, there is this fake scandal in the USA.

Stacy Michelle Walker,

doesn't happen in school. Miss Hackett should have invited David to her home.