All Comments on 'A Threesome With Katie'

Your mechanical presentation of the Jim/Katie/William povs is just lazy. It doesn't work. Learn to write.

although the 2-person narrative was a little strained as each one was telling the other what they were doing and feeling, instead of only describing what they personally were doing and feeling. Still, an interesting approach. I don't usually read the 2-party stories

the way you wrote it made it to hard to get into it or horny from it . no stars

I love it, James. Wishing I was Katie... She's a lucky lady.

Glad you're still posting on Literotica. I miss you...

xoxo

S

Same old lame cuck crap.