All Comments on 'A Touch of Lunacy Ch. 06'

I've been waiting for the next chapter for a while and it's amazing as usual, keep up the good work!

omg.. lol.. i have been waiting for this chapter! Its so good to be able to read it. But what the heck... why arent they trying to work things out and be together?!? lol... I want them together finally! lol :) But i guess you already have a great plan :) Goodluck. Please dont keep us waiting too long :)

I lve the story bur I think she forgave him too easily.

I kinda like the chase too! I hope Donovan doesn't get too depressed. I like the alpha male attitude. This was a good chapter and slightly more polished than the others. Still so short though! If you update regularly, that will balance out the painfully short chapters.

I can't wait for the next chapter, the story is sooo good! Definitely one of my favourites. Who does Katherine get together with ( I kind of hope it's Joe)?

Really love this story. Great storyline and complex characters. I am eagerly awaiting updates.Thanks for an enjoyable read :)

I hope she can get over her hang ups with Donovan I think they will be good for each other and she would make a perfect alfa bitch and put Judy in her place! More please but please don't drag the angst out that would irritating very quickly! She needs to get over it and fall in love with Donovan!

I read everything posted on this story today and it is really good. I like our little fireball Katherine. She is definately commanding respect with her little cases of the badass. I like that she is becoming more accepting and Donovan is less demanding. If they can find the right balance I think the physical chemistry between them could become more. I'm enjoying this story and am looking forward to the reveal of why the vampires are attacking the females. I smell a vampire prophecy in the works that they are trying to prevent from coming true. Who knows, maybe they are just crazy! LOL! :)

I love this story!!! I think your writing is getting SO much better!! Please hurry for the next story.

Good story. Want to see how it develops.

You write very well, the story flows smoothly and with a good pace. Also, I'm really enjoying the plot line and look forward to seeing how they work things out. :-) Keep up the good work!

I really want her to end up with joe. I can see her being great friends with donovan (maybe even a great sister-in-law) and helping him with his crazy alittle, maybe even helping him find love with someone eventually but i don't think she should end up with him.

I think it would be so interesting to see a relationship develop between her and Joe.

Hurry up and write the next chapter... we can't wait.

keep writing please!!! I want to find out what next!!!

Keep going cannot wait for the next chapter.

I wish my writing was as good as yours.

Incredible story.... Can't wait until the next chapter. Make it soon and a little longer

This is a good story. I really like the way the story is going I hope you finish it. Please don't keep us waiting too long for it.

I enjoyed this chapter alot. I actually only have read 5 and this one so I have to catch up but the story seems to be good and i hope you'll be continuing it.

will there be a next chapter?? it feels like we've been waiting forever... i really want to see what will happen next. hopefully something with Joe?

they would be an awesome couple and might cause a little drama with donovan that his brother is in love with katherine and she likes him back. definately wanna see her with joe.

please write more i really like this story

Hope you update soon! I like that your heroine realistic and fallible but isn't a pushover (I hate that!). She has a right to be angry but recognizes that she has to deal w/ her new reality. Keep writing!

its really good....i want more so continue writing

Please finish the story!!!

And then...

my mom always said that was the best way to kill someone stronger than you

I said it before and i`l say it again the writer who wrote this is sick ( or just incredibly stupid). Who cares if he is responsible for Melanines death or not or that Katherine forgives him ? He killed a bunch of innocent girls, and worse : every1 is ok with that !