All Comments on 'A Very Nice Welcome Home'

I liked the way you described the build up to meeting up, and the use of stinky bootneck slang might be off putting to some, but to those of us that understand, it brings a sense of realism ;) Please write more!

You have a natural talent for telling a story. An editor would be beneficial for you on the mechanical parts of getting your story told. Please do keep writing!

I have to agree...your detailed descriptive writing, even though you claim you are no writer, was impressive...definitely had this girl panting and juicy...maybe even a little jealous. ;)

very nice.

Wishing I was her!

hi all I just wanted to post a thank you for taking the time to read my story. I have a few email feedbacks and they are very much appreciated. please keep the comments coming good or bad.

ladies thank you for your comments I actually find it a big turn on to know it has the desired effect. if you would like a personalised story feel free to get in touch.

mick cheer mate I will look into an editor and I appreciate your feedback.

many thanks all

Just out of curiosity Daz how many women send feedback?? As a woman, I am interested to know. Jeannie

lol only you thus far my dear and 1 guy x

Hot ho hot. Loved this story also. Going back to read all then will tell you my ultimate fave. The sexual positions are out of the wet world. Nothing like a lover driving it home... Thank you for making my afternoon...