All Comments on 'A Very Special Anniversary Ch. 01'

"Oh yeah Gary replied," as he jumped out of his chair.

This sentence has more than one punctuation error. I am not a grammar nazi but when I notice it, it’s bad. Using commas and quotation marks can change the very meaning and the way we comprehend the written word. A good proofreader or an app would be helpful.

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