All Comments on 'A Very Talented Girl'

You have a nice talent for putting words together. I'm thinking that the plot in relationship to real life probability is a little weak, but fantasy is what erotica is all about and in my opinion you did a good job. Keep it going.

Talk about a full service hotel. Very nicely written. The story moved along smoothly, the writing didn't distract at all from the story. Easier said than done.

Good story. It was really great. It went just a little fast for me. Also, a little too neat, everything was too perfect. Thanks. Keep writing.