All Comments on 'A Week in Tuscany'

"Sarah gasped at the unexpected intrusion, then writhed as I returned my attention to her clit."

Do try to keep in mind who are are fucking at any one time. You were with Jenn, not Sarah.

Well written and well paced though, as already stated, a couple of continuity errors but over all, I'm looking forward to the next instalment.

Nice start. Can't wait for chapter two.

There'd better be more!