by Rob in AZ
Thanks for the appropriate use of tense and dialog to bring your people to life... Easy to say, hard to do... and the people are just too hot for words while being everyday kind of normal horny folks too... Keep up the good work...
Rob, I'm so glad to see you back. You have easily become my favorite author. Although this new story is very good, I still like to hear about the adventures with Trish, the two girls, and "Rob". I'm feverishly awaiting the long-awaited honeymoon.....Please don't stay away, I really look forward to your stories.
Rob,
It's good to see the storyline back in place so future fans will learn of the great lifestyle the angels have.
Keep the angels coming! - Steve
love the story so far great direction in the personalitys of them all keep on righting
You rule Rob!
Keep them and us cumming!
Excelence in erotic writing.
but....
what happened to chapter 9 & 10???
lost some of the flow.