All Comments on 'Abigail & Jeff are Hypnotized Ch. 1'

Oh my God, I wish you could teach this to me so I could hypnotise my husband so he can fuck my best friend while I fuck her husband!!! I will fantasize about this for months, now. Thanks for a hot story.

I have always wanted to see my wife hypnotized and made horney. I often wondered if she would go beyond her regular sexual activities while I watched

mistress tenise hypnotized me to learn 4 a male sub to cum was wrong i feel she is righti love to please.

what a great way to help them sleep, Abigail needs to explore her bi side too, and jeff could use some help in that department.

who does your proof reading ?

"She had a bra that hooked in the front......... Jeff reached behind Abigail and unsnapped her bra." same paragraph......!!

slopping,

very sloppy

Loved this short story. I wish you'd write more.

Get someone to proofread your writing! Stupid grammar errors abound. Missing open quotes are very confusing.