All Comments on 'Above an Alpha Ch. 03'

great story you got going here plainjane, and now i have to wonder what the heck is trent too. Oh I can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next!

and i have a idea what she is, but i do think that trent is a latent alpha, one that needs a specific reason to emerge. and it just showed

I CANNOT WAIT FOR THIS!!!! SO MUCH FOR ASSUMPTIONS.....

I agree, Trent is a latent Alpha. Leah... I don't know still. Maybe another mystical being? I just hope Mark just admits defeat and try not to force himself on her.. seems desperate. :D Trent, I want him to break out to see/ talk to her. Plus, what was it that Kate was talking about in the last chapter? (By the way, I love her!)

Please don't stop writing, I have to know what happens next!

But man I do like that Trent! Mark Mark seems like well - a dork!

Trent is awesome!!! Mark....is kind of a dick....Can't wait for your next chapter to see how this goes!!!

This is one of the oddest stories I've ever read!!! I don't mean that as an insult or a complement for that matter. It's just an observation. I admit I am curious about Leah as well as her effect on the were's. I really hope Trent is her mate, despite his weird fascination with hamburgers.

I guess I'll have to keep reading to see where you take this.

im sorry but you lost me i couldnt even finish this chapter.. its not a bad story i sure its got protential but its just not for me .. maybe i'll come bac to it when your finished it.. but i cant put myself thru the suffering of waiting each month to read utter dribble.

I like Leah. She cracks me up. I'm rooting for Trent, as Mark is a dipshit. How is he Alpha? I seriously dislike the packmates, or at least many of them. I disagree with other commenters about this story being confusing. I think you are building up to something here and am having no trouble following so far. My only wish is that the chapters were longer. So far, so good though. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

And I snicker every time I read Mark Mark Masters.

Where is your story going? Where ever it is heading I'm following. Can't wait to find out what Leah is and how she knows about weres. Please keep it coming.

Loving it. Cant wait to see where you take it.

I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Literally....keep the updates coming this story is truly one the best

you are one of the funniest writers I have ever had the pleasure of reading. you have a really calm humor that is killing me slowly. Keep writing because you have some serious talent.

Please keep it coming - it makes me laugh out loud, which has always got to be good ;)

Great story. I like your sense of humor.

extremely short attention spans. Like squirrels and fish.. if not for the content, I would say small children.

There is no chance to get into the storyline because you are hopping all over the place. I keep coming back because I am intrigued by Leah but I haven't enjoyed any of it.

Clearly many people enjoy this style of writing but I'm not one of them, so I'm going to stop reading now.

Thanks for writing, though! So many people love it!

I enjoy every word of it. I have figured out that she must be Luna's sister. They might figure it out if they just listened to her and their own instincts. So funny!

I enjoy every word of it. I have figured out that she must be Luna's sister. They might figure it out if they just listened to her and their own instincts. So funny!

Can a story really be cute? I do like the way you've turned accepted were lore on it's head.