All Comments on 'Above an Alpha Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More please :)

I love this story! I'm so curious about what will happen! please keep writing because i'm desperate to keep reading.

popparazzipopparazziover 11 years ago
Very enjoyabe

I feel bad for Trent at the moment,but I know Leah will work something out,so he won't be murdered. Love your writing style.The comedy and the dialogue is priceless.I always laugh when reading a chapter.Good job.Can't wait to find out what Leah is.Looking forward to the next chapter.

secretsidessecretsidesover 11 years ago

Roflmao!! Mattress Porn???? I love this story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I check every day for a new chapter.

This is a great story please post soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I love this story Leah is a very funny person

poisedpencilpoisedpencilover 11 years ago
akk!

So far the story isn't much, but the way you tell it is fantastic! Those darn wooly mammoths, buried under the weight of their brains! Akk! hilarious!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You have me hooked

i have been reading your post since the start and l'm loving it. Can't wait to find out about leah's past. please keep writing.

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago
Mark Mark Masters

Priceless!

RheamistressRheamistressover 11 years ago

And you just had to end it there for the moment.... LOL.. ok.. get the next chapter out already... smiling

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
; )

love it

huntersangelhuntersangelover 11 years ago
i love the way you tell a story:)

this is really a great story the way you're telling it, it's humorous and intriguing. and i really, really, REALLY want to know WHAT THE HECK IS HER STORY! Hope you post the next chapter soon because i really want to know.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
****

funny story.

you should have it under humor section.

can't wait for ch 5

LoneR1985LoneR1985over 11 years ago
Fantastic Read

I love your story. I love the quirkiness of all your characters. Please continue writing !

hakdrakkenhakdrakkenover 11 years ago
The Werewolves of Xanth

That's what this makes me think of. I've been transported to the stories I read about thirty years ago. Or Mr. Anthony has decided to try his hand at writing werewolf porn.

I wonder how many will see the similarity...

roseloveroseloveover 11 years ago
ok

Itz really funny but come on, how can one girl have two mates but it is good n i want to see who she ends up with. Plz have everyone have a happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Talk about DRAGGED out garbage, I'm done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
shut up!!! I love this story....more more more...there im begging now lol

Begging ....please more

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