All Comments on 'Actions Speak Louder Than Words Ch. 02'

My only advice is that you should be careful of the verb tense you use when speaking in first person. It can be hard to follow/read when the tenses sound off. Otherwise I am eager and interested in hearing more of this story. Thanks for posting.

Thanks I'm working very hard on that. I admit it's a flaw Im actively working on. I'm also searching for a new editor before I finish chapter 3 so there's no wait like this time around. I appreciate the constructive critisim. It's much appreciated this is an outlet for me but also a learning moment. ~Allisonfancy

The it's taking a while to get the main characters to meet again, knowing how they got here is worth it.

Your story is good so far. Hopefully you update soon and it doesn't talk too long for the characters to meet because then it'll just get boring. Also its a bit of a turn off that Nicole loves Aeropostale lol that store is so tacky and played out and isn't she a bit too old to be shopping there?? I haven't shopped there since middle school lol

I'm 28 and tacky then! LOL I love that store :-) all of my cami's, the tacky socks that I wear under my scrubs and my pajamas/ loungewear comes from there. I also love white house black market for the grown up in me. A lot of me is in this character. Not to sound conceded but I'm an attractive dork, that loves to read, At dinner we sit around the table and tell terrible knock knock jokes ( my two year old doesn't get past knock knock) my husband laughs when I giggle at a funny part in a story or get embarrassed for a character. Good or bad a lot of that will show in Nichole. Thanks for voting even tho you don't like my beloved store ;-) jk I honestly appreciate your feedback. And to answer you other question it wont take too long I'm getting impatient my self I wanna jump right to that part but the story won't make sense if do much love~ allisonfancy

I just realized somehow a whole section is missing. IDK how this happened I cut and pasted the document. Ugggg frustration! So so sorry I'll fix and submit the change now.

Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

So super happy that you got a chance to post this chapter. Can't wait for the next one. -DC

I really liked this but it was long overdue. I hope the next one doesn't take as long but I enjoyed this nevertheless.

This story is incredible. I am busting for the next installments in this incredible gem. The contrasts in the relationships of the characters and the character descriptions are amazingly digestible giving the reader a real feel of the atmospherics on-going. The story has a Cinderella feel to it and the build-up is maddening. Not finding the next chapter to read was nerve racking and frustrating. You brought me this far and let me feel anxious like the episode of Dallas when JR was killed I felt the same pang. You probably know you're good at writing so please finish this...please. Thank you.

I love these two installments. Nichole is something else and Alexandros is going to have to put it on her to keep her. As a CEO, I think he can keep her. What I am looking forward to is the meeting between his wife and his mother. And then I want to see Nichole take on Beverly, the wanna be wife. Don't leave us hang. I can't wait for the Update!

This is a great story. Please don't leave us hanging!

Please don't leave us hanging...i hate getting into stories that leave you hanging on a cliff!!!

I thoroughly loved the first chapter. I was fine with the drama that was introduced until we get to Beverly. I think with all the ex-fiance and family drama that we don't need any Bitch assistant sticking her nose in it. I kinda think if she has been that bad with shit he would have figured out she was screwing in his personal life by now. I lost a lot of enthusiasm for the story too much drama.

I hate to be kept in suspense. Pls continue...

Please continue this story....

We got a 2 page chapter and nothing much significant happened and it is quite frustrating 'cause it fells like stalling...Shame!

I like how it starts and look forward to more in the future .....

... With the updates on the next chapter. Can't wait to read it,

You are going to write more, please do this so good.

in the pig sty ground 1 *

Can't wait for the next instalment :D

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I need you to finish the story

Please tell me you're gonna finish the story sometime soon

PLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE!!!! Give us an update...I think you have a good thing going with this story!

Don't let them haters break your spirit, about your story! People like that are just JEALOUS!

I gave you 5 stars on each installment! I wish I could give you more. Also, there are other sites you can post this story on, and it will be appreciated.

Finish this story completely hooked

well....it' been 3 years and it's obvious this writer is now a ghost, can someone do us ALL a favor and continue/finish this story please??? :(((

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. It has a really great beginning and an excellent story line. It would be great if Nichole is pregnant. When Alex finds her I hope she does not act like a ninny. This man is "off the chain" and hopefully different from Malcolm. He will give her what she need and love her like she desires. I hope the next chapters will be longer. Its a shame I cannot give you ten stars for this story so I'll have to settle for five. Great work looking forward to the continuation.

This is a wonderfully written story and I can't wait for the finish. It has so much potential and passion. I hope this Greek God is everything that he seems to be and I hope Nicole has a backbone to stand up to his mother and be the woman he needs. To bad I can only give you five stars for this one. Waiting

Perfect beginning. Amazing detail. I’m just sad you won’t be continuing it.. I mean it’s been years...

Finish the story. I'll buy the book!!

I know I'm not three only one who only comes back I this site in hopes

This story gets completed. If anyone knows this writer if she's alive and well

And still writting please give us info on how to find it/her

One simple question: Where is the rest of the story. It’s good so far, but I hate cliffhangers

I need that fin.