All Comments on 'Adam's Adventures Ch. 01'

Cant wait to see where Adam go's with his powers.

It could be alot of fun for him and everyone else.

this story has great potential, longer chapters would be appreciated, keep up th good work

However, the best part of the story "So after having his way with Melissa that afternoon" really fell flat. Details, we need details!

the story started very nice! I hope we will soon read more about his abilitys and what he did with it! Man i wish me b-day wishes would come true like his ;-)

Adam needs to fuck Melissa and her daughters

this story has alot of potential, I hope you will continue. I too want to know what happens with Melissa. Plus there are so many other possibilities out there, good luck with your writing.

Not bad work continue the good work, and maybe make it a whole master/slave sort of thing.

Lots of potential here! I would love to see what happens with Melissa. You really should add more detail in the sex scenes. This is a very good story so far, I look forward to, and hope there will be, new chapters!! Good luck!!

Don't let it go to waste! While the birthday wish concept is different, the numbers could be significant; you never mentioned month, day or year he was born so that could play into why the wishing power worked. Don't leave the story hanging!