All Comments on 'Adam's Little Sister Ch. 08'

Keep writing. You're doing a great job.

Skimming it now it just gets worse, fuck!!!

What a load of bullshit this story became, it went from a great Sibling tale of love and degenerated into this fucking rubbish. For Gods sake give it up please!!!!!

Still 1/5

5 stars for this chapter, was a very enjoyable and exciting read!!

However, if Doug comes into the picture-threesome with Adam and Susan-I am going to skip the chapter...not interested...

And, stories still need better editing!