by damppanties
Very interesting idea, and quite humorous. I'll be waiting for the next installment.
Very nice change of pace. So, c'mon already! Let's get Adam laid!
I always knew God had a sense of humor! Can't wait to see if Adam can find slot B, of if he'll have troubles locating.
thanks, damppanties, for a fun read..
Dampy,
This was fun to read. I hope the next part will not be too long in the waiting.
Headache not yet invented eh?
Great idea and outline for a series. I hope the remainder are as good as this
There is more to cum... er, come!!!
I'm drooling at the mouth LOL
Great start!!!!! ;-)
Good story here. The banal bits of humour are a bit distracting though (for example the fonts and the foreword). The fun should be more evident as he reads through them and tries to make sense of it, more so when he tries it.
The language and tone were great as always. Overall 5*
Clearly a basic course. Mentioned Slot B(eaver) but not Slot O(ral) or Slot P(oopchute). Not to mention the Grippers or the Squish-Togethers or the Pokey Nibbles! Then, after a few more participants come along, the rest of the LIT sections, as Graduate School!
This is a very unusual approach to telling a story! I loved it!
Five stars from me.
However, where are the aforementioned following chapters? Thanks for writing.
What is it after that? Please go on. It is also a good way of learning English as a foreign language, Salute from mainland China, beijingblowjob@sina.com, waiting for your instruction
Apologies for keeping you waiting so long for your well deserved 5.
Must admit, how come text New Roman before they were created, guess G' had to call it something.
Loved this as it typifies my grasp of organised religiosities.
If you're still around, g'wan go further in this mode.
"Oliver Twist", Charles Dickens, 1837. See movie of the same name, 1948.
Please more?????