All Comments on 'Adventures of Hollywood Jim Ch. 15'

I am LOVING this series.... more more more, but how about some mainstream celebs? Charlize cumes to mind *grin*, or Jen Anniston. What I would give for a life like Jim's. Keep going, the escape from reality is awesome.

It was good but... I don't know. It goes way too fast. I like a story with suspense and great detail. I mean you just get straight to the point. But no erotic detail, like you said "She did this for a while and then stood up"... Explain how she sucked his cock. Explain how he felt. Make is hotter.

"Bridget grabbed something to wear..." when she wasn't even there?! This many stories, I bet there's thousands of mistakes!!!