All Comments on 'Adventures of Venus Ch. 03'

I like where this is going!

but you need to read through your stories before you publish them.

Aside from the high degree of action in your stories, there is another thing that's consistent.

But it probably isn't one you would choose.

You should read through your writing before you publish it. Preferably read it out loud, then you might spot some areas that easily could be improved.

What's the difference between each word in these groups?

naval/navel

peddles/pedals/petals

apprised/appraised

shutter/shudder

to give you only four examples.

Some might say "spelling nazi".

I'm trying to help you as a writer. So, if you're going to publish your writing for everybody to read, you should take enough care of the spelling to show that you care enough about what you write. It's simple, and I'm sure that you want your writing to be presented in the best light.