by jakebarnes33
However I didn't read it thourgly as I couldn't get into it
This marriage is on the rocks, booze, drugs and extramerital sex will kill it. Thanks
...even if it isn't pretty. It would be interesting to see how everyone feels and reacts when they are sober.
As the previous reader commented, you've gone for quite a realistic approach. This has slightly diminished the erotic element, but I commend you for taking the path less travelled.
This wasn't erotic, it wasn't a story, and it wasn't interesting. Pass it by reader.
Some of the best sex involves drink and drugs. Not a bad story at all.
Writing was quite good but a shame for effort spent on 3 countem 3 quite sick people and a setting without value or arousal. Who's and whats to like for all this effort?<P>
Kind of a waste huh.