All Comments on 'After Hours'

Absolutely amazing writing! Keep it up :)

Very good ! Left me more than a little turned on :p

You're a gifted writer, m'dear! A few typos and repeated words, but otherwise quite graceful.

Read your first paragraph. "The only two on this floor..." followed by a description of one person. After finishing a story, put it aside for a day, then proofread it slowly. That will usually catch this type of error. You've a good way with words. Keep writing.

A few typos, but the description and style was much better than other stuff I've read here...I agree with the others, keep writing. Did the job for me ;)