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by techsan

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Scorpio44Scorpio44about 18 years ago
Some will read and find fault

I'm not one of them. I know this is a fantasy. As such it is a great one. Your writing is good. The story flows and the characters are ones I can care about.

bunny3374bunny3374about 16 years ago
great story!

This is a great story! It would have been awesome if it had been true too. Great writing! I really enjoyed reading it!

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