by DMercator
A great continuation, with ever more erotic and hardening twists! Cant wait to read more!
Wow! This has me wanting to write again! Tell me! Tell me more! Bravo! Just added ya to my favorites!
Please continue your story. Hanging on the edge of my seat. What did they do?
when my wife and I were dating something like this happened. We have now been married 32 years.
I can't see how each telling the other about earlier cheating could ever be a good thing. Unless both suddenly became non-jealous sluts, there is no way one could listen to a story and not feel pain about the cheating that had occured.
an experiece of lust that surpassed all of the moments of love, sharing and commitment to one another for 20+ (twenty plus) years that had happened between you. No talk about children, but, if so, would that have overshadowed the birth of each one of them. And now you are going to "share" those "exciting moments" of infidelity by Carol and Paul.
My husband and I have been in MFM and FMF relationships for more than 20 years and LOVE it. Please keep writing, you are really good.
Don't leave it at that! Write the rest!
I can't believe people critisize the things in these stories. They are all just imaginary and made up most of the time. If you don't like what's in a story, then go somewhere else. Comment on the writing, not the content. In this case, it's the talk and the anticipation that makes one want to read more. This is great but it ended to quick...we need more.
Keep writing!
By all means continue this story, it is hot. Has the potential for multi parts. Well written.
But this one does have a somewhat different approach. There are some flaws, such as the wife appearing far too slutty for the husband to not have known it, plus she also shows far too much confidence in the situation, and flaws in the comments that are not quite realistic.
The "different" part makes it worth a second chapter, I gave it a five because it is better than a 4 and there is no 4.5.
continue now ... this has been a great read from the beginning; I was hoping there would be a continuance and here it is - WOW! Will be waiting on pins and needles!
Definitely interested. After the menage any future tales involving Carol recounting sexcapades (with other men) to hubby would be nice as well. Thanks.
Very well done. Please continue. I look forward to the next installment.