All Comments on 'Afternoon Terror'

great start, hope to see you continue with the story.

The rougherthe better , looking forward to hearing her scream as her arse is abused for the first time.

Regards From Peter in New Zealand

yes go for it use all of her good story

Unless Sharon is in on this rape/fantasy, I think her orgasms are a little premature, don't you? That notwithstanding, it is a good beginning and I look forward to further chapters.

Cheers!

this is the secind time i've read this story and it is a very promising start, dangerous subject, which of course makes it all the more exciting... awhile now since you published it... are we going to see a part 2? x

Unless she's the kind of girl that has rape fantasies anyway that doesn't make sense that she'd orgasam quickly unless they were trying to make her for their own sadistic purpose. That said it was well written, still not as hot as your ss/hg stuff though, that's always much much better written.

Enjoyed it but wish you'd get round to finishing the story. At the end it sounds as though it was just about to get really interesting!