All Comments on 'Alexis in Puerto Vallarta'

Art.

This piece, assuming it to be untrue or at least changed in the majority, is art. It is art considering the writing style and the balance when approaching the story. The sentences are not run-on, badly spelled, or poorly formed. At times, I noticed a short sentance approach. This adds diversity to a story.

This work seemed to flow with a constantly changing rhythm that never seemed staccatto or sectioned. Rushed, is a feeling that comes from many stories. This story is not among them in my humble opinion. By no means am I suggesting this piece is perfect. However, my stand remains that this text is in a class of excellence quite a distance above 'average joe.'

Well done.

For all intents and purposes, I believe that this story was not written, but crafted.

Do continue to practice your skills.

This should be in Romance, aside from the political and religious opinions its a great story. Almost made me cry.