by Scotsman69
love it still. Thanks for the opportunity to revisit.
You are truly a Master of words. Truly. No one else could put beauty, love and tenderness together with humiliation, and blood-lust together in such a way. I'm at a loss for words.
A truly a brilliant mix of romance and cruelty. The first part showing the surrender of Miriam to Alicia made the wicked conclusion so good. I cannot add much more that has not been covered by the other commentators but I could not leave with just the 5 star vote. You are very good at this and we can only enjoy. Thanks
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Humanity Intruding.... this will stay with me for a while
As always love it.
This story has everything, well-drawn characters and the hottest dirty sex. My hand had to reach my zipper, and few stories on this site do that to me. A must-read for anyone who is interested in BDSM.
some of my older stories are getting an airing. This is an especially wicked and well-contrived one...
Fingers exciting clit , prostate , male exciting female , female exciting male simultaneously ----there's a democratic , sexual symmetry in the tail of this tale !!
I loved the complexity of your characterisation and the sophistication of your narrative! Extraordinary work!