All Comments on 'All At Sea Ch. 01'

by bigpreggoman

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SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 10 years ago
I'll write what just about everyone is thinking, okay?

Sick ass shit. Extreme fetishism. Boring, badly written garbage. Nobody gives a shit. The fact that you deluge the site with all these lame fucking excuses for stories, at the same time, on the same day, only reinforces your dementia in our collective minds. You've clearly been obsessing about this weird-ass shit for some time. Too bad your fascination with pregnancies (of whatever kind seems to excite you) didn't impart any WRITING ABILITY. The evidence to support this comment will arrive when you're stories (HAH, it's funny to call them that!) receive their ratings. ONES across the board? Only because we can't vote ZEROS or NEGATIVE numbers, whack-job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
It's not that bad...

Why did it end just before it got good?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
write chapter 2

What happens to her?

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