by RejectReality
Read with interest ,Really liked the twist at the end....Keep'em cuming....
Your writing is impeccable. Great storyline and details. The only thing I would have added would be him thoroughly sniffing, licking, sucking and tongue fucking her tangy tight bumhole until she had a blazing orgasm. 5 stars.
I'm an avid reader and have been visiting Literotica for nearly seven years. Your stories, all of them *smiles* have made it to the top of my list. If you ever stop writing, I just might cry. Keep it up, please!~Amber Scarlet
Man what a great story and a wicked twist at the end! Bravo! Keep up the good work!
i loved your story, it's one of the best here! Keep up the good work!!! :-D
great length. not too long or short. i enjoyed the twist. keep it up. you are quite good. it got the job done for me!!