All Comments on 'All Is Fair Ch. 18'

Andrew the vampire and witch hunter, awesome. Can't wait. 5 stars

From beginning to end and everything inbetween. This has been one of the best stories here on Lit., and I'm sad that it's come to an end.

I'll keep my eyes out for your next story. If it's anything like this, it will be a blast. :)

So good! Too short! Reading these short chapters is like get only one bite of your absolutely favorite meal after you've been starved for days. Give me more!

Wow this had me hooked. I sat till 3 in the morning just to finish it. Just couldn't put it down.

Thanks.

Maggie

This is absolutely perfect!! I just reread this series and it was every bit as perfect as the first time. You are an incredible writer!

Just two points that don't make all that much sense.

Didn't the parents teach Rebekka what would happen if she kills 3 people? And why does she want her magic back, when once that happens the fire demon is once more coming for her?

And surely one of the best i ever read. You are in my top 5 Author. Thank you.

What is going to happen when she kills one more time, that will be number three.

One of the best stories I've read here, despite the lack of editorial work, overall, the plot line, characters, the originality of giving a different take on the paranormal world we read so often, made this an unputdownable piece of creative literature that is pure gold. I had to finish this in one sitting during the weekend. Thank god it is the weekend. I don't know how I'll survive if I had found this story on a week day. I hate to do an all-nighter & go to work the next day - sneaking to read at work duirng breaks. Anyway, Great job! Can't wait to see if there is a spin-off on Andrew.

You Are Awesome!

Sorry for writing so much, but that was great! All my love, all best wishes and a great salute to you in thanks for this great and intricate story! Wow indeed!

Great story. Thank you.

I love this story, but Andrew REALLY Needs His Own Story. With Happy Ending ( No Pun Intended ).

Loved this story, loved these characters.

I understand some people were annoyed with Helena, but I think it went well with her background. She was desperate for a family and did what she thought she had to do. Like Andrew said, she was only human, and as being one myself I can verify that we're idiots :) please write a story for Andrew, I love his guts. And include Brooks and Helena in it!!

Thank you for actually finishing a series also excellent story

truly wonderful and amazing.

By far the best wolf story i have ever, ever read and found it incredibly captivating.

May you for long, continue writing such beautiful, wonderful words.

Thank you!