All Comments on 'All of Eden Ch. 01'

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 10 years ago
A marvellous story!

Well-written, hot and very naughty - I hope you will bring us Chapter 2 very soon! Thank you for sharing your excellent work with us and please have five stars with my best wishes.

jhollanderjhollanderabout 10 years ago

Hot, fun, rough and intense! Looking forward to chapter 2!

texasacetexasaceabout 10 years ago
you are a SUPER writer...

I need to run so that I can read all the other stories that you have here... keep it up, and you will keep me UP!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
OMG!!!

Wow, I absolutely LOVE it! It's gotten me very hot and bothered. Thank you:)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Awesome

Very good story. I found myself in Jeremy's shoes for the most part. I like that it is believable and extremely erotic at the same time.

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