All Comments on 'All Things Come... Ch. 09'

The entire series is marvelous, a fantasy to be sure.

I'm quite enjoying Mr Lancer's saga. My only complaint is against the rather sudden way each chapter ends, usually in the midst of what could be a much longer sexual episode. It's sort of a literary coitus interruptus! (Of course I'm not here solely for masturbatory inspiration--there are abundant quicker and less refined ways to get off online--but it's not coincidentally I'm reading you rather than, say, Dostoevsky.) I did get a good laugh at the Victorian joke with which you ended things this time, though. :)