All Comments on 'Allison Gets Used'

Read both your stories - they both stink. Don't give up your day job

I just read both your storys and think for your first 2 you did a pretty good job. I think you may have rushed to the action to soon, maybe slow it down a little, build it up a little more. But overall they were both good.

have you no shame? this is worse than meecrob.

Please give up your day job and write more of these hot stories.