All Comments on 'Alpha Male'

This story is very poorly written and reads like it was writen from the point of view of a very stupid girl, by a guy that has never even talked to a girl, let alone had sex with one.

There is no flow to the story, and it is not very descriptive or even really imaginative. There are lots of variations of the "mean, horny, girl just have to have it" story but I really didn't like this at all.