All Comments on 'Alternate Reality Ch. 01'

Dude, this is awesome! The dialog feels kind of weird or forced but I DO like the way you've got Venus stammering and blushing her way through explaining her fucked up plant rapings. And she's warming up to the good professor.

Story is just ok so far. The on the way to school I encountered a portal/rift/tear in dimension/etc. is a tad over done. Also at least give a reason for why the plants want to rape her anyway other then for the lulz.

3 out of 5

Could be much better. On a side note, I did enjoy the banter of the characters a good bit.