by LukeCoolhand
Story is just ok so far. The on the way to school I encountered a portal/rift/tear in dimension/etc. is a tad over done. Also at least give a reason for why the plants want to rape her anyway other then for the lulz.
3 out of 5
Could be much better. On a side note, I did enjoy the banter of the characters a good bit.
Dude, this is awesome! The dialog feels kind of weird or forced but I DO like the way you've got Venus stammering and blushing her way through explaining her fucked up plant rapings. And she's warming up to the good professor.