All Comments on 'Alternates'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I must like fur

I'v just found your work, Fantastic writing

frank4052frank4052almost 16 years ago
Just wonderful

very good, just loved it

melaniebellamymelaniebellamyalmost 16 years ago
good story

I liked the story, but shouldn't it technically be in the fetish section of the site, seeing as it deals pretty much exclusively with fur sex?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
well done

I love your work...I've read a lot of it but please..next time spell check ok?..it's as annoying as it gets for me to see great glaring typos...ok call me OCD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great job!

This is a lovely story. Slow but intriguing buildup to an incredible climax. I love your writing, keep it up!

The only things that I would like to critique here would be the lack of separation between the characters viewpoints and the use of "anymore" instead of "now" in multiple places. Other than that, this truly was fun to read and I can't wait for more stories like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What could have been

Could have been a great story except for all the stupidity about fur...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sugar daddy

Must be nice to have an older man paying for everything, including furs, leather & cashmere.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

So, how do you clean the wet spot off a very valuable fur? Inquiring minds want to know.

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