All Comments on 'Always The Bridesmaid...'

Great story!!! Very hot and very believable.

i hope u were with me

great story wish there was more to it

You changed the dads name and the story ended too quickly

what did bridesmaid have to do with this story...nothing

You need to get more creative and finish what you start

Frustration upon frustration and I do get the 'Always the Bridesmaid ' reference. Other than changing the father's name, it was a very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.