All Comments on 'Amazonia Chronicles Ch. 01'

this is an interesting beginning to a whole new world of amazons which is unexpected and fruitful. Disappointingly and distractedly there are many spelling errors and needs to be edited.

AylahAyres

You are doing a good job. You might have a few misspellings but that's fine. I have seen a lot worse misspellings than yours so the last comment somebody left is a total idiot. Also I have read over 500 stories on this website not just the fantasy but a mix of all subjects. I have to say I really like the way your going with the Amazons in the story. They aren't forcing him against his will he is going from place to place at his own will and paste that's good and he has received the benefit from a flower to increase his manhood so that's spectacular. You need to keep up working on this story it's really turning into a good one.