All Comments on 'Amber's Awakening Ch. 01'

Loved it, especially the very rare, on Lit. feminine outlook.

This is a wonderful story, and I like even more knowing how much work you put into it. :)

Black Sabbath and tape decks - wow.

Seriously, I thought it was a neatly paced and sensitively crafted beginning to a First Time story. Worth reading just for the line "I knew sucking was involved"! Nice character contrasts between Amber, Cody and the parents. Looking forward to parts 2 & 3.

Minor point. I think your paragraphs are often a bit long for the rolling, backlit screen of Lit. Six to eight lines seem easier to read.

Great stuff, well done and thanks.

Thank you all for your positive comments. :) Don't worry, I will not stop writing because some person I have never met tells me to stop. Chapter two is on the way!

Good writing, good scene setting & good descriptive stuff. Keep it up (I am!) and keep on writing more. Thank you.

Don't write any more

You should definitely keep writing it was awesome :) I love the way you told the story - it was very realistic.

I hope Amber goes after what her heart desires instead of what her parents and society thinks she should do.

That was amazing! Please say there's more to come.

That was amazing! Realistic and hot, I read as if I had no other choice. Please, please, please continue!