All Comments on 'Amber's Awakening Ch. 03'

Showing some age, the first 2 lines of 'Don't fear the reaper' were, "All our times have come, Here, but now they're gone." Just a perfect overture for your story.

Thought you captured the insouciance and nervousness of Amber very well. The climax, perhaps a tad obvious, I thought written very well and evocative.The series was great, enjoyable and a super First Time story.

Great stuff.

dont write any more

Don't listen to the anonymous poster. You are a talented writer and i enjoyed all the chapters

Sweet delightful genuine.

Actually believable and pleasing erotica.

No bra size, no cock size, no wildly improbable cursing during sex.

Two nice people making out, growing bolder, being real

So - I may have said it before - thank you.

This series was truly delish.

Ignore the 'ANONY- MOUSES' who only seem able to crap on others but don't have the gutz or ability to put anything down themselves.

Chapter 3 was even better than 1 and 2. I could feel what Amber was feeling. You brought me as near as a mere man can come to understanding female sexual sensations and emotions. Again, I suspect that Amber's story is mostly the story of your own sexual awakening.

Please keep on writing.