All Comments on 'Amuse Bouche'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Hot Stuff

But I'm afraid this will end badly, sooner than later.

Agoodman954Agoodman954almost 15 years ago
Nice short story

WOW if you have the chance to fuck a sexy cougar why not. Lets her more about were this story goes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nope Not erotic at all.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
It was a hit and miss affair.

Though the story read well and was nicely paced, with a decent enough twist to keep me reading to the end, I must admit to cringing at some of the 'pastes', as if the sex was incidental to the idea of the ending. And 'the pucker of her asshole winking at me' followed by some word that I'm gonna have to dig out my dictionary for was perhaps the worst (ok, and horribly best)line I think I've ever read! I see you're a new writer. Good for you, keep them coming. Mancelt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Beautifully done

A most skillfully written story: short, sweet, and very hot. Clever, too. More, please.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
really hot fucking his girl friend's mom

That's really erotic fucking his girl friends mom. I want to read more of him fucking her brain dead the next time. Thanks for the great story......Rich

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