by real_life_swingers78
Silly, run of the mill fantasy about swinging. People without the ability to handle a real relationship stoop to this.
Really hot that they stayed together and didn't run off into separate rooms... that would have ruined the whole story...good job
A bit or real life experience and a bit more maturity would probably make a better read. You are to much into fantasy to put much raalism in this story. Thus the erotic feelings and emotions dont come thru. A real life swinger for years.