All Comments on 'Amy's Date Night'

Same ol , same ol gay married crap

Are you all sickos? Write something erotic for a change, this category has enough of this shit. 1*

What make writers like this tick? No stars.

Your writing was very descriptive, full of juicy details all the way from the initial shower scene to the final panties scene. It was a good story and you should be proud of that.

It described a date night that my wife and so many other hot wives have had. That was hot...especially, the subtheme of her bringing home dessert for her husband!

However, it was a fairly predictable plot in the hot wives genre. In your next story you might consider inserting some surprises or twists to the plot. Something that upsets the apple cart; so to speak.

Again, I'm just offering some constructive criticism. This piece was very well written and erotic. Keep up the good work!

Amazing story! Would love to meet your wonderful wife! You are one lucky man!

You are married to a skank and you like to eat other guy's cum? You think this is erotic? Ha Ha Ha Ha!

There is to much of this shit out there.

Stop adding to the garbage and make room for real writers!!!!!!!!

I really don't understand this sickness. There is nothing erotic about it!!!

Love it. 5*

Erotic? Not in my world.

I love it when my wife brings me desert like that too also I'm a truck driver and I get horny out here on the road I just gave my co driver a bj when he started cumming he came fire ever it seemed when we were finished he said that was his first time cumming in over a year I got the biggest laid of cum that I ever had it was salty tasting but delicious

might have been a good story if the author could write.

A synonym for whore, when trying to clean a bitch up a little bit.

Proving once again that hot wife is just a polite way to say whore. Think someone took a hammer to your brains and what was your manhood. Stupid and pathetic. Ridiculous