All Comments on 'An Accidental Love God Ch. 11'

I think the ending was pretty sudden, and could have could have gone more smoothly. Good story, though.

Great series thank you.

I like your style. You can start another any time. I'm 'up' for it.

I loved the series and concept but feel that that you short changed his wife and totally ignored his kids. Maybe you could do a spin-off where his wife becomes a succubus and his kids discover their heritage.

Just a suggestion, but I feel kind of sorry for him. After all, it is like knowing your wife has an incurable disease with only a very limited time to live. Take pity on the poor guy and bring her into the fold too.

5*****

M51

The proper plurals are "incubi" and "Succubi".

Great story.

Thanks for a good story. just enough description to keep the story line from becoming boring. Again thanks great read.

If you want readers to take the time to read your shit, at least take the two seconds to run it through a simple spellcheck, there were so many stupid errors it made it virtually unreadable. Too bad, because the premise behind the story was okay. (aside from the ambiguous rape stuff)

THE ENDING HOWEVER HAD MUCH TO BE DESIRED!

Yeah, l agree with Randog below, liked the story hated the ending. Just another bunch of cheaters in the end, somewhat disappointing

Scores 3/5 for the letdown