All Comments on 'An August Afternoon'

thats what i want to know wtf?no build up just jerk it and she blows him?

you wasted your time and the sites space by posting a sloppy rushed middle of a story. where's the beginning? where's the plot? where's the character developmnet? where's the end?

too short. love the sister's body. more please!

One of those stories where you just wish the author had finished it. Or at least written enough to get INTO the story. The thinking is normally that the reader will wait for more...sometimes we don't...

more ASAP

But you don't have a story to tell. Come back when you do.

Because I hate lazy fucking writers who tease readers. Come back when you have a readable story.

Where is the rest of the STORY??? NOT LEAVE PEOPLE HANGING it is not nice!!!

Good story what happens next

there was no incest...