by sensualstoryteller4
Where is the rest of the STORY??? NOT LEAVE PEOPLE HANGING it is not nice!!!
Because I hate lazy fucking writers who tease readers. Come back when you have a readable story.
But you don't have a story to tell. Come back when you do.
One of those stories where you just wish the author had finished it. Or at least written enough to get INTO the story. The thinking is normally that the reader will wait for more...sometimes we don't...
you wasted your time and the sites space by posting a sloppy rushed middle of a story. where's the beginning? where's the plot? where's the character developmnet? where's the end?
thats what i want to know wtf?no build up just jerk it and she blows him?