by troy_michels
I honestly didn't expect to like it (how lame is that?!) But you did a great job! You have a great natural style and flair for dialog, your characters were real and believable. I hope you try your hand (no pun intended) at some other genres! Well done!
I enjoyed this story a lot. It was sexy and hot and very arousing. Thanks for sharing.
5 Stars from the Responsible Pleasure Society! Well done! I hope you will write more along these same lines!
I love that idea of mutual masturbation being hot and erotic but not quite cheating. i even looked up the depeche mode song, that would be a great hot strip song!!!