All Comments on 'An Intruder'

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barepussloverbarepussloveralmost 15 years ago
Interesting Start!!

Great start, I hope, to a story line. Left me hard and wanting more!

barepussloverbarepussloveralmost 15 years ago
Interesting Start!!

Great start, I hope, to a story line. Left me hard and wanting more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
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good start keep up standard

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Grammar

Structure and grammar need improvement.

Bella221Bella221over 1 year ago

Need more details and grammar needs alittle work

What happens next? The foursome begins, ty and Dave recorded Ali and Nora having girl on girl action before Dave does something to nora?

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