All Comments on 'An Opportunity Not To Be Missed Ch. 04'

i will send you hate mails if you wont post the next chapter soon :D hehehehehe, i cant wait for this girl to see Ted's pal, pls pls pls, can i suggest? could you give the girl a little bit control of the situation? i mean more on bargaining with the OLD guys, exchanging sex with the tapes, less domination from the oldies but albit more with the girl? i like to see her giving pleasure the oldies with disgust and pittiness, kinda turn-on dont u think? my respect to you, wonderful posts.. cant wait for the next one. :D

Spoiled it with bringing Ted back, he'll probably end up pimpimg her out to his friends. Story needs to go back to George, maybe add the mother getting suspicious or even the woman neighbour